It's readily obvious how in the past few days McCain has been very publicly working in congress while Obama has taken the more subtle route. We need to show that McCain's reckless tactic of suspending his campaign and dancing around Washington may be what a good Senator does, but Obama is showing the characteristics of what a great president does.

Barack is doing a great job of trying to create a more personal connection with voters, but to subtly emphasize that fact, he needs to switch from using "you" with voters to "we/us." Imagine how much more powerful this line would have been, if he'd altered it just slightly in this way: "Who is it that he's going to tell that change is coming?

when you look at sheer numbers more people have donated to your historic campaign than people who have voted for sarah palin in her entire political career. This statistic is very compelling and would look great on paper and it would stir conversation on the news.

Barack has been great in all his speaches. His promises sound so wonderful, id like to see a little more action and focus on what each candidate can do for this country not what they think about each other. We need a leader someone who will make the best decisions and bring this nation together as a whole under god so that we can turn things back around.

The ad begins with a shot of the White House with the flag half mast.
"Nine vice presidents have had the responsibility of assuming the presidency in times of national turmoil."
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A photo of Barack Obama thinking at his desk pans across.
"Barack Obama understands how important it is to chose someone who could assume that mantel."
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